Just my musings. I've always been the girl with a pen (or a book for that matter), and now I'd like to share.
Wednesday, 8 September 2010
I don't want to go back. We moored the boat among the reeds and the water ran between my toes, warm and caressing. Now the mud has dried on the bottom of my feet and crumbles when I curl my toes. He does that. He draws a callused fingertip from my ankle up to the hollow behind my knee and my toes curl under as though an invisible thread binds them to his hands.
How long would it be, before they realise I am gone, if I never go back? How long before they understand it was they who made me run away? Who would be first to notice the missing boat and its owner? I wonder, will they recognise the missing piece of the jigsaw?
The clouds are hurrying across the sky, chasing the sunlight to bed. A breeze runs after them, ruffling the treetops as it goes by. But we remain. He has set the boat free. When darkness comes, we will be ready, my lover and I.
Inspired by this lovely picture prompt over at:
http://creativewriting.ie/writing-exercises/
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Thanks Jayne for posting your link. It's a lovely piece of writing, I particularly like the line and the image of the clouds "chasing the sunlight to bed." www.writeolive.com
ReplyDeleteThats a great take on the prompt, Jayne, I like your writing style - it draws you in.
ReplyDeleteThanks Olive and Brigid. I scribbled this between history and science this morning and wasn't too sure...thanks for commenting!
ReplyDeleteGreat take on the prompt. I really liked the start...'We moored the boat among the reeds and the water ran between my toes, warm and caressing.'
ReplyDeleteDraws the reader in using the senses. Good luck with your blog.
Thanks very muchly,Reflections
ReplyDeleteQuite romantic...
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